Post by angelgonemad on Oct 7, 2005 7:17:53 GMT -5
This piece of fan fic was inspired by Maximum Ride: Angel Experiment by James Patterson. First I will give you a brief description of setting etc.
The FF is set in 2025, Max and Fang are together as a couple and after bringing up the flock, they begin a family of their own, but non the less the Erasers and the scientist’s are still out there, lurking in Death Valley waiting for their right time to strike amongst the flock…they are determined to capture Max and will do anything to do so.
Also in my story…Max hasn’t found out that she has a chip in her arm unlike in the actual book MR.
Guess Who’s Back?
Way up high on the ridge of Mount Everest sits a log cabin, dwelling within this log cabin there are three very different and unique beings. They are Max, Fang and Skye. They are all seen as mutants to the world, this is why they hide in fear that they will be hunted by those who do not understand them or want to hurt them, this includes the Erasers, model like people that have a tendency to transform into wolves when they please, who love to hunt people with wings.
‘Mommy..Mommy,’ screamed Skye from her bedroom.
Max sat bolt up right in her bed and shook Fang awake.
‘There’s something wrong with Skye’
Max runs through the house to where her baby is sitting crying in her bedroom.
‘What’s wrong baby? Are you having bad dreams again?’
‘Yes, I had a dream that those wolf men were coming after us in the house and that they had pinned me down and made me watch you and Daddy get hurt again,’ said Skye in a very shaky and terrified voice.
‘You know those wolf men can’t hurt us, remember they don’t know where we are!’
Fang comes walking into the room, in a half daze, still slightly in land of nod.
‘What’s wrong Skye?’ asks Fang.
‘The wolf dream again Daddy.’
Max sits and cuddles her child and tries not to look worried about what Skye just told her for the fourth night in a row. But Max is worried because she knows that the Eraser’s, people will the features of models but have the ability to transform into wolves at any given time, will find them eventually just like in Skye’s dreams. Max knows this as Skye has the ability of premonition, seeing things before it actually happens.
Fang sits in the living room and wonders about when the Eraser’s will strike because whenever they do, he and Max will be ready for them. Max appears.
‘Is she back to sleep?’ he asks Max.
‘Yeah, for the time being. What are we going to do Fang?’ says Max falling onto the sofa and sitting right up close to Fang. Fang puts his arms around her. Max no feels slightly more safe.
‘I don’t know, I don’t know!’
Hey, this is the beginning of my first fan fic..i don't think it's a great start though :s
The FF is set in 2025, Max and Fang are together as a couple and after bringing up the flock, they begin a family of their own, but non the less the Erasers and the scientist’s are still out there, lurking in Death Valley waiting for their right time to strike amongst the flock…they are determined to capture Max and will do anything to do so.
Also in my story…Max hasn’t found out that she has a chip in her arm unlike in the actual book MR.
Guess Who’s Back?
Way up high on the ridge of Mount Everest sits a log cabin, dwelling within this log cabin there are three very different and unique beings. They are Max, Fang and Skye. They are all seen as mutants to the world, this is why they hide in fear that they will be hunted by those who do not understand them or want to hurt them, this includes the Erasers, model like people that have a tendency to transform into wolves when they please, who love to hunt people with wings.
‘Mommy..Mommy,’ screamed Skye from her bedroom.
Max sat bolt up right in her bed and shook Fang awake.
‘There’s something wrong with Skye’
Max runs through the house to where her baby is sitting crying in her bedroom.
‘What’s wrong baby? Are you having bad dreams again?’
‘Yes, I had a dream that those wolf men were coming after us in the house and that they had pinned me down and made me watch you and Daddy get hurt again,’ said Skye in a very shaky and terrified voice.
‘You know those wolf men can’t hurt us, remember they don’t know where we are!’
Fang comes walking into the room, in a half daze, still slightly in land of nod.
‘What’s wrong Skye?’ asks Fang.
‘The wolf dream again Daddy.’
Max sits and cuddles her child and tries not to look worried about what Skye just told her for the fourth night in a row. But Max is worried because she knows that the Eraser’s, people will the features of models but have the ability to transform into wolves at any given time, will find them eventually just like in Skye’s dreams. Max knows this as Skye has the ability of premonition, seeing things before it actually happens.
Fang sits in the living room and wonders about when the Eraser’s will strike because whenever they do, he and Max will be ready for them. Max appears.
‘Is she back to sleep?’ he asks Max.
‘Yeah, for the time being. What are we going to do Fang?’ says Max falling onto the sofa and sitting right up close to Fang. Fang puts his arms around her. Max no feels slightly more safe.
‘I don’t know, I don’t know!’
Hey, this is the beginning of my first fan fic..i don't think it's a great start though :s