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Post by Ranna on Oct 12, 2005 16:42:37 GMT -5
This is for those I will never know, those I have never found, but still lost.
The Unborn Child
He had lungs, Yet never breathed the crisp morning air. He had a heart, that never lept with joy. He had a mind, Never tested in school. He had legs, Yet never raced the wind. He had life, It was taken from him. He had a mouth, That never tasted the sweetness of a birthday cake. He had two eyes, that never saw the sun rise, Or the moon glow at night. He had a future, Stolen from him by the choice of another. He never felt the wind brush his face, Nor the warmth of sun upon his limbs. Never cried tears for a lost loved one, Or felt chill of sadness grip him.
He was a son, A friend. A person. ~~~~ I thank my parents for having me, and my brothers, and pray everyday for those I mentioned in my poem.
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Post by sideshowbob on Oct 12, 2005 17:32:21 GMT -5
very good! i like it!
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Post by Ranna on Oct 12, 2005 21:20:36 GMT -5
Thxs
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Post by sideshowbob on Oct 12, 2005 22:58:05 GMT -5
yup yup
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Post by lya4c on Oct 13, 2005 15:27:17 GMT -5
I love it. Is it okay if I share it with my english teacher? (I'll give you credit)
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Post by Ranna on Oct 13, 2005 15:34:26 GMT -5
Sure, I don't mind. It's kind of cool being-Annonymous, lol. THe mystery person, hehe.
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Post by lya4c on Oct 13, 2005 15:36:52 GMT -5
lol.... thanks
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Post by Ranna on Oct 13, 2005 15:47:44 GMT -5
I bet that was the one post, huh? lol
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Post by lya4c on Oct 13, 2005 16:20:20 GMT -5
lol... I think
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BeccyMwa
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Fly Away... BEFORE I CATCH YOU!!! *evil cackle*
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Post by BeccyMwa on Oct 14, 2005 4:13:52 GMT -5
Woh, me wuvs
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Post by Ranna on Oct 14, 2005 23:58:02 GMT -5
Thank you Bec!
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BeccyMwa
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Fly Away... BEFORE I CATCH YOU!!! *evil cackle*
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Post by BeccyMwa on Oct 17, 2005 5:31:08 GMT -5
No problemo. You are pure talent
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