Post by DadsGFNOV1st1974 on Oct 22, 2005 9:10:50 GMT -5
Ok this is whatI have so far. This is what evil story Picture Perfect inspired in me. LoL I know it's wayy off...but reading the firstt few sentences of that story gave me the idea *is morbid* LoL
I do post this trusting that no one will use it as their work. It is my own!! It will be published later with all of my other short stories.
Murder In Sunrose Valley
By Kori Dalzotto October 22.2005-
"Eleanor!! You look so pretty in your dress!", my father spoke with proud, joyful words. I was wearing my new frilly blue dress. I was on top of the world. I was so happy I could hardly contain myself. My mother looked on so proud as I walked out the door with my father to go to the school's Father, Daughter dance......
But that's just history, a memory. I was 8 then. That's how things used to be before it happened.......
July 14, 1997. The local newspaper headline dared to read:
2 MURDERS IN SUNROSE VALLEY!!
Word of it had spread fast throughout my tiny town. The first murder in 98 years. My father and mother were the victims. Spatter covered the walls and floors. Throughout the house there was blood. Everywhere....... It was 5 days old. I had been off to camp and no one had thought to check in on the house since my parents had not left the house in 4 days. What a wonderful welcome home....
I found my mother in the bathroom. She was half laying on the floor and half propped by the bathtub. Her nightgown pulled up and tied around her neck. Hrer legs had several briuses and marks on them. The bathroom items were strewn across the floor. Her eyes were rolled into the back of her head and her lips had turned purple. She had several stab wounds to her chest and thighs. Her arms had slit marks on her wrists.Blood seemed to cover every nook and cranny. I ran screaming from the room and I had already vomitted on the floor. I ran to the nearest house and asked them to call the police. My summer dress had blood on the all over the bottom of it.
My father was found by the police in worse state. He was in the basement. Fully clothed. A slit neck and so many stab and gun shot wounds that he looked so unlike himself. He had been hung by a cord on the piping. The police suspected he died second because his setup would have taken longer to put together. It was sickening...my parents never did anything wrong. My father worked at a grocery store and my mother was a a-stay-at-home mom. It's not like they dealed drugs or anything like that. They were truely good people and had nearly no enemies. Why did they deserve this?
Now I am 18 writing this story to you.
What does everyone think??? I really like evil or murder mysteries. LoL
I do post this trusting that no one will use it as their work. It is my own!! It will be published later with all of my other short stories.
Murder In Sunrose Valley
By Kori Dalzotto October 22.2005-
"Eleanor!! You look so pretty in your dress!", my father spoke with proud, joyful words. I was wearing my new frilly blue dress. I was on top of the world. I was so happy I could hardly contain myself. My mother looked on so proud as I walked out the door with my father to go to the school's Father, Daughter dance......
But that's just history, a memory. I was 8 then. That's how things used to be before it happened.......
July 14, 1997. The local newspaper headline dared to read:
2 MURDERS IN SUNROSE VALLEY!!
Word of it had spread fast throughout my tiny town. The first murder in 98 years. My father and mother were the victims. Spatter covered the walls and floors. Throughout the house there was blood. Everywhere....... It was 5 days old. I had been off to camp and no one had thought to check in on the house since my parents had not left the house in 4 days. What a wonderful welcome home....
I found my mother in the bathroom. She was half laying on the floor and half propped by the bathtub. Her nightgown pulled up and tied around her neck. Hrer legs had several briuses and marks on them. The bathroom items were strewn across the floor. Her eyes were rolled into the back of her head and her lips had turned purple. She had several stab wounds to her chest and thighs. Her arms had slit marks on her wrists.Blood seemed to cover every nook and cranny. I ran screaming from the room and I had already vomitted on the floor. I ran to the nearest house and asked them to call the police. My summer dress had blood on the all over the bottom of it.
My father was found by the police in worse state. He was in the basement. Fully clothed. A slit neck and so many stab and gun shot wounds that he looked so unlike himself. He had been hung by a cord on the piping. The police suspected he died second because his setup would have taken longer to put together. It was sickening...my parents never did anything wrong. My father worked at a grocery store and my mother was a a-stay-at-home mom. It's not like they dealed drugs or anything like that. They were truely good people and had nearly no enemies. Why did they deserve this?
Now I am 18 writing this story to you.
What does everyone think??? I really like evil or murder mysteries. LoL
