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Post by Ranna on Oct 7, 2005 14:54:56 GMT -5
Who am I?
All my friends think I walk this path. I've never fallen, Nor strayed. But they do not see the crimes I commit. The guilt that I contain within me. They see what they wish, Never to glimps the turmoil under my mask.
All my family thinks is I am a joke, I follow like a blind sheep. I am unable to stay strong, To stand for myself. They measure me with critical eyes, Seeing only my failures. Proving my fears. All they see is what I was. Not what I've become, Only what they wish. They never see what lies beneath.
Never again will someone see beyond my mask. To much pain, Guilt Failures. These outwiegh any sucess Or joy I might have. I have buried myself behind a stone wall. Whatever I may be.
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BeccyMwa
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Fly Away... BEFORE I CATCH YOU!!! *evil cackle*
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Post by BeccyMwa on Oct 8, 2005 6:36:11 GMT -5
*applauds* Deep, nice meaning. I love it ranna, you write good poems!
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Post by Ranna on Oct 8, 2005 18:17:42 GMT -5
Thxs Beccy.
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Post by lya4c on Oct 8, 2005 19:17:09 GMT -5
*joins in on the applause*
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BeccyMwa
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Fly Away... BEFORE I CATCH YOU!!! *evil cackle*
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Post by BeccyMwa on Oct 8, 2005 21:06:28 GMT -5
*Keeps applauding*
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Post by Ranna on Oct 8, 2005 21:41:29 GMT -5
lol, *bows* your too kind ppls.
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Post by lya4c on Oct 9, 2005 14:55:09 GMT -5
*continues applauding*
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BeccyMwa
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Fly Away... BEFORE I CATCH YOU!!! *evil cackle*
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Post by BeccyMwa on Oct 9, 2005 19:32:25 GMT -5
*rounds up some random people off the street to read Ranna's poem* ... *They all join in applauding*
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Post by Ranna on Oct 9, 2005 19:47:05 GMT -5
lol, thank you. *bribes ppl back onto street* hehe, *glomps Beccy, and Lya*
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BeccyMwa
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Fly Away... BEFORE I CATCH YOU!!! *evil cackle*
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Post by BeccyMwa on Oct 9, 2005 20:03:05 GMT -5
*Huggle glomps ranna back*
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Post by Ranna on Oct 9, 2005 20:08:12 GMT -5
*tickles Beccy*
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Fly Away... BEFORE I CATCH YOU!!! *evil cackle*
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Post by BeccyMwa on Oct 9, 2005 20:22:29 GMT -5
*tries to get away* Hey that tickles!
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Post by Ranna on Oct 9, 2005 20:23:06 GMT -5
hahaha!
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Post by BeccyMwa on Oct 9, 2005 20:29:24 GMT -5
hehehe
hohoho
huhuhu
hihihi
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Post by sideshowbob on Oct 11, 2005 23:14:16 GMT -5
great job! very nice!
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